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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-21 09:26 PM


The morning dew settled like
beads of crystal on the
velvely red petals of
my last Summer rose

I reached out to touch it
only to have the petals fall
to the ground and land at my feet
Petals so fragile and delicate
as the early Autumn winds
carried them on their way

Our love was spent such a long time ago
'tho neither you nor I would admit
that love had deserted us
as we both tried to cling
to an imaginary lifeboat

Nothing would save our love
for it had run its course
and had finally come aground
The time had come for
both of us to move on

Like the changes in the seasons
we too were in need of a change
For now we were void of
love and happiness as we
moved towards a long cold Winter

I look ahead with promise
towards the next Summer and
I hope that the warm winds will
blow kindly for me then and
once again fill my life with
the love and happiness
I so desperately crave

Suetang

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Mother_Earth
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since 2000-11-20
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1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan
1 posted 2001-08-21 09:30 PM


Sue, I am sure if you are ready and open you will find the love you are looking for.  Go slowly...... Look both ways before you "cross".  ME
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2 posted 2002-02-08 05:56 PM




(sad sigh) So very sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope now you have found true happiness and your heart beats with pure love always! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is wonderful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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