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Unspoken Love........ a sonnet
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Unspoken Love........ a sonnet |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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What then, of this love I feel so profound? Do I dare to speak of it openly? Would you echo my heart in sweet resound? Or will my love be denied painfully? This need to speak of my heart’s desire Causes me to pause with hesitation Fearing you will feel my passionate fire Is but a flame of infatuation Oh, my sweet love, I hope you not dismiss This ever burning need inside my heart This consuming ache to share but one kiss Allowing me just one chance to impart Let me share with you, words I long to say….. Let me find courage, to speak them one day….. ~SEA~ * my inspiration *  /pip/Forum50/HTML/002344.html "I know you, I walked with you once upon a dream" |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, very good! Very very good! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Beautiful!! Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This need to speak of my heart’s desire Causes me to pause with hesitation Fearing you will feel my passionate fire Is but a flame of infatuation Oh, my sweet love, I hope you not dismiss This ever burning need inside my heart This consuming ache to share but one kiss Allowing me just one chance to impart =================================== ya got the flame...ya got the ache ... hey baby..this is a moth sonnet and Im diggin it  beautiful poetic and romantic phrases here girlie...and it read aloud smooth as butter way cool sea-sonnet-gator |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
A Sea Sonnet, now that was simply beautiful, and JM is right, it read spoken beautifully Sea, good on you! If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sigh...sigh...sigh...you make this look so easy...helen |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
to share but one kiss could one eat but one Lay's chip give me the whole bag You honor me with your friendship and the artistry of your work. |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
This is so beautiful. I do believe I will keep it. I am glad I ran across it. alan |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautifully longing write, SEA...the rhyme and cadence are flawless as well...excellent job! sp  tried to write a letter |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Oh Sea how beautiful penned this is...I love every line of it, and thank you for the url...seems I missed that beauty from Interloper... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wonderful SEA! I relate to your words. You've really mastered the sonnet...well expressed and crafted! You should be very proud, indeed. And, I'm sure that your husband is so very proud of your talent as well~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
superbly done. . . yes, you do make it look easy. . . --------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you, each of you, so much. I really am enjoying the sonnets Interloper taught me how. He's really really good at these! My husband thinks my poetry is growing, and that is the most he's ever said about it! LOL again, thank you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sighhhhhhh, BEAUTIFUL! Maree |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
You have expressed yourself wonderfully here. I really like it. Nevertheless I wrote you a little email. Happy writing! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Seems to be a reasonable request...James |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
SEA, I love sonnets and yours was very touching. nothing is to be gained in secrecy, free your heart and give it voice. David2 |
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