Dreamer's Block and its Effect

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Open Poetry #15

Dreamer's Block and its Effect

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-08-21 06:15 PM

Sluggish words
drop
on this page.
They drag cliche from side to side
and feed on too much simplicity.
Even the dictionaries that rhyme
cannot aid when I don't know the words.
Sluggish words drop
and splatter.
Just something else to clean up later

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-08-21 07:25 PM

How did you know how those words do to me, gentle one? very gentle smile..nice write, which I always get out of you

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-08-21 07:32 PM

Some days are like that. Very well expressed. Joyce

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2001-08-21 08:50 PM

OH yes, I have too many of those days. Nice write.
Sandra

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-08-21 10:09 PM

Ohhh, yeah...it's one of those times where I'm glad I'm working on the computer, otherwise, I'd be killing a forest! Very cool write, Jenn...

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-08-21 10:41 PM

that's where I find that having my own dictionary helps. . . LOL

well done my friend. . . you clean up well. . .

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Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

6 posted 2001-08-22 01:32 AM

Hah! New book not helping huh? We all have those days, and I have more than not actually, great write Jenn!

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