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ShadowRider
Senior Member

since 2001-07-14

Posts 1038
USA

0 posted 2001-08-21 03:38 AM

"Song of Hope"

Raining down, in silver showers, mercury droplets
Flowing gown, in starlight glow, golden amulets

Streaming tears, of happier days, in hot pools
Dreaming fears, some half crazed, not so cruel

Hands held, in loving embrace, gentle squeeze
Eyes beheld, the sadness erased, a want to please

Hearts locked, a path for two, paved with kindness
Cupid mocked, a bath of you, slave to my blindness

Lips unspoken, for tender kissing, a warm invite
Chain unbroken, despite the missing, a lovers flight.

Gentle soaring, a cloudy glide, wing to wing
Tender adoring, two side by side, they softly sing

A song of promise
A hymn of hope
A fabric of tomorrow
An erasure of sorrow

You give these things, with all your heart
Our life: a ring - we shan't ever part!

I adore you so. .

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2001-08-21 03:57 AM

love this...the style and the song...helen

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-08-21 08:52 AM

Lovely!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2001-08-21 05:39 PM

Very lovely SR..nicely done..*S*

~Victoria~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

Dulcinea
Senior Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

4 posted 2001-08-21 09:30 PM

It will be all that and more, won't it? *sigh* I can't tell you how very special this is SR...so very special! ((((HUG))))

shadow974
Senior Member

since 2001-06-21

Posts 636
Michigan

5 posted 2001-08-21 09:40 PM

Beautiful!!

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

6 posted 2001-08-21 10:12 PM

Oh, this, this is more beautiful than I could ever tell you! the rhymes are absolutely amazing...wonderful song-like flow...excellent job! I love it! (if you couldn't tell) Into the library with this, for sure!

sp

tried to write a letter
to tell you how I feel,
but all I kept on writing
was slipping on the tears from the day...

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

7 posted 2001-08-21 11:41 PM

What a wonderful read. I enjoyed this very much.

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