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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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Earth 3rd Rock from the sun!!

0 posted 2001-08-20 09:15 PM



life...existance
in death resistance
stumbling on
obstacles overcoming
to pleasures succumbing
clashing of wills
left naked
from their bitter pills
destiny awakening
all else forsaking
as your free will
they begin taking
honor thy name
as you play their game
wake up from the dream
it still remains the same
look a little deeper
it's not always as it seems
left alone as the shadows
move through the moon beams
exhausted now
unable to weep
lost are all of
the promises that
they won't keep
rest now as your
soul begins to sleep....

Julie :)



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East Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-08-25 12:10 PM


does the soul end?

no. . . the soul continues. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2001-08-25 12:43 PM


Day-dreams do wander
to sights yet ahead
But linger much longer
over tears that we shed
One thing do remember
through thickness of grim
all the worst things in life
we snare from within

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