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Trina
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since 2001-06-28
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0 posted 2001-08-20 09:05 PM



Your hair is a sloppy dirty brown
and your feet are really big.
Your mouth droops down
and your body's the size of a twig.

Let's talk about your voice,
squeaky as always and so annoying.
It's not like you don't have a choice
you choose not to be enjoying.

As for you and the boys
let's just say you have no case.
Playing with their toys,
instead of dressing up in lace.

Rolling around in dirt
and picking up a scent
And you never seem hurt,
your character never seems bent

I always seem to notice you alone
and I never have anything to say
but now I do.
My admiration for you has grown.
Your independence is the one thing
I hope never goes away.

© Copyright 2001 Trina - All Rights Reserved
Interloper
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-08-20 10:18 PM


Ah, youthful ignorance and discovery without fear ...
Well done.

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
2 posted 2001-08-21 06:59 AM


As long as they are happy. We should always leave well enough alone. I love this. I thought you were talking about me there for a minute. LOL. Very well done!

Sincerely,
Regina

Trina
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since 2001-06-28
Posts 97

3 posted 2001-08-21 04:22 PM


Lol, thanx Interloper and Rwood. Glad you liked my poem. Take care,

Trina

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