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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-20 08:18 PM



      Still Lingering

I like it
when you
whisper
you move
into me
so close
the heat of
your breath
melting
part of me
exposed
when
your body
moves away
I still feel
the chill
as if you
remaining there
essence
lingering still

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
1 posted 2001-08-20 08:23 PM


Excelent poem, I enjoyed it much!!

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2001-08-20 08:30 PM


Oooh!! I loved this....really did!!

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

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