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Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-20 07:30 PM


Importance of!!

I know so very little
For I always felt I was aware
Through my pains and heartaches
I longed to find myself, so baffled
Looking through many faces
I found no honesty, truth or reality
Until on one very sad day
My eyes met very sad eyes
Tears flowed freely, pain thundered away
The effortless cry of anguish, and sadness
From a lonely soul in a vast faraway
Dreams of learning, sending doubts and fears
Through the sweetness of natural beauty
Accompanied by no other than self
Representing a life, a will, and needs
Perplexed amidst the challenge indeed
Wondering, questioning, wanting, but confused
Decision now become doubt of the tomorrow
Sitting alone, reflecting an island beauty
In a small way, through tears of eyes in sorrow
I offered my company, was I right
Of concern was to bring back  lost smiles
Casting aside  this endless fright
For I wanted to show I'd walk hundreds of miles
To ensure happiness at all times
For in this importance, I have learned much
Enough to say that life is about caring and loving
And the price of friendship is worth dying for
When honesty meets truth head on

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-08-20 08:03 PM


Enough to say that life is about caring and loving
And the price of friendship is worth dying for
When honesty meets truth head on

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Such a powerful piece and so well presented.  Nice flow and great read.  

shadow974
Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
2 posted 2001-08-20 08:19 PM


Very well said, excelent read.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

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