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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-20 04:22 AM



Cocooned

what is the pull
to fire
am I to
ever understand
to be a larva
cocooned
in a butterflies
land
I am
up on stage
know all the lines
for my part
just keep missing
my cue
and not sure now
when to start

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

© Copyright 2001 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-20 05:50 AM


OneSlickLady~
The curtain rises, sweet butterfly~

Soar~

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25
Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass
2 posted 2001-08-20 08:40 AM


You are truly a talented poet. My compliments on another lovely piece, written in perfect poetic form.

"We also know how cruel the truth often is, and we wonder whether delusion is not more consoling."- Henri Poincare (1854-1912)

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2001-08-20 08:42 AM


Very nicely written........You're not alone in your thoughts here. I enjoyed the read very much!
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4 posted 2001-08-20 09:11 AM


very nice... good use of metaphor...

as usual... my pleasure to read.

Blaec
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since 2001-04-23
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The Sunshine State
5 posted 2001-08-20 09:19 AM


Very Nice.  I really enjoyed and related to this.

Kris

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