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dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida

0 posted 2001-08-19 11:09 PM


ok..heres a silly one..   wrote this one after i realized i waved to the blasted aol dude...teehee  -dg


if people could see me--
the things that i do
theyd laugh off their hienies
theyd double in two...

i talk to that guy on AOL
when he tells me
"goodbye"--
i think he's swell

sometimes though
i just wave to him
as if he can see me
and then i grin

its good, i guess
i can laugh at me
makes for a moment
of nutsy glee

but oh, if anyone at all
were peeking
theyd think my marbles
scattered and freaking

theyd find me dancing
like a maniac
then laughing wildly
at what good form i LACK!

hey,those insane moments
are what i need!
to keep me sane,
to keep me freed

so if you see me
in the weird
dont laugh too loudly--
i might be skeered!

wondering how long
ive been spied upon
possibly picking my nose
in yawn...

wowwy! youd probably
never talk to me
cause i'm a strange one
when alone i be!

dgvarner
   8-21-01



~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown


[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-19-2001).]

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Songbird
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Missouri
1 posted 2001-08-20 12:02 PM


Sounds like your getting high on that sunshine!! Fun poem..
Duncan
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2 posted 2001-08-20 12:03 PM


And I am laughing it off, but then I talk to all kinds of inanimate objects so of course, I would.
cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
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Phoenix, Az
3 posted 2001-08-20 12:06 PM


DG!
You have either got too much time on your hands or you are spending way too much time in that sun of yours!  Although I say getting a little crazy sometimes is a good thing!  
hugs
Cindi

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-08-20 02:53 AM


DG~
Okay, girlie girl~
Stand up ...
Put your hands over your head ...
Take three steps away from the monitor ...
And repeat after me -
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okay
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Honest !
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Now~
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You're on Passions Camera !
And get your finger out of your nose !


~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

kaile
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5 posted 2001-08-20 06:12 AM


dg,

nay, i will still read your poetry and laugh along WITH you even though i realise "gosh, what weird habits you have"...grins

btw, what does "hienies" mean?

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2001-08-20 11:29 PM



dg-
  ROFL!!!!!!!!

  I'm laughing so loud, you and Marge
  can probably hear me in Florida!! LOL!
  I can just picture you sitting there
  with a silly grin on your face and
  waving at the AOL guy!  Too funny!!
  Thanks for the laugh...I needed that!

  btw...I see you...

  Love ya,
  ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
7 posted 2001-08-20 11:50 PM


SONGBIRD..just singin in the sun..  

DUNCAN..lol..(shh..i ANSWER myself..) ROFL  

CINDI..too much time on my hands i do not have!  in fact, i WISH i had more time!  i'd write REAL poetry! LOL

MARGIE.."I...AM...OK...HONEST!"    

KAILE..LOL @ you! *hienies = butts*     and thanks for laughing WITH me..!  

TRICKY..teehee..i posted this just for you..no withdawls for you!  dgvarner is still a poet..if even in a lull..!  lol  and hopefully ONLY YOU can pic such a thing as me waving to the stupid guy...lol!

thanks everybody for reading!  makes me smile that even when i dont write "real poetry" you still like me!.. lol  

hugs, g
  



~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 08-20-2001).]

shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
8 posted 2001-08-20 11:53 PM


Wow!!! that was a extra special read. You have me laughing so hard I'm crying. It's great to have fun.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.
ARAB PROVERB

Balladeer
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9 posted 2001-08-21 12:01 PM


My mind boggles with the image of what happens when You've Got Mail!!  
dgvarner
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High Springs, Florida
10 posted 2001-08-21 12:01 PM


SHADOW..did you laugh your hienie off?? lol   thanks for reading!  

hugs, g

dgvarner
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Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
11 posted 2001-08-21 12:04 PM


BALLADEER..woohoo!  the excitement is almost unbearable...!!  LOL!  hey, think on this one:  "youve got pictures"!  cool beans!!

hugs, g

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