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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-19 10:07 PM


When life is getting me down
and I need reassurance
I know I can always take refuge
under the canopy of your love
Your love cures all my ills and
is the foundation for my happiness

Your love gives me a purpose in life
as your love reaches all directions
from the compass within my heart
Your love makes me soar like an eagle
high above the ground
Your love is never taken for granted
but is to be nurtured
like a beautiful flowering bulb

It seems like an age since I've seen you
How slowly time seems to pass
as the days trickle into weeks
and my soul feels as though
it has lost its way

No matter where you may be
you are never far from my thoughts
My life has been given more lustre
since spending time with you

Whenever I'm with you
your love gives me wings
I walk on water
I bloom within the radius of your love
and my days are edged in gold
as your love takes the reigns
of my heart

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-20 12:12 PM


SueTang~

'I bloom within the radius of your love
and my days are edged in gold'


Just toooo, toooooooo lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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cpalmer
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since 2001-06-26
Posts 977
Phoenix, Az
2 posted 2001-08-20 12:58 PM


Tender and well spoken...the imagery is just delightful...wonderful write..enjoyed!
Cindi

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
3 posted 2001-08-21 02:37 PM


Hi Suetang,

Beautifully done very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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