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Still, Children..... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Still, Children hush my baby comforted, be you’re my child all children, we circle comes full, complete hush my baby quiet, sleep grow my baby come to terms with who you are what you learn circle comes full, complete hush my baby quiet, sleep give, my child love, perfect treasure those with respect circle comes full, complete hush my baby quiet, sleep someone’s child still are we come full round, reach harmony circle comes full, complete hush my baby, quiet, sleep in your round ripples touch what you’ve given heaven’s such I am child child are you still, children never through hush my baby comforted, be you’re my child all children, we [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 08-19-2001).] |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
We do all need comforting occasionally, don't we  I still see the child in me |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
feels like a lullaby...very lovely just in case you're interested...when I read the line "reach harmony" my mind wanted to make it 'rich harmony' your line is seeking it, still, conveying hope, which may be exactly what you wish to convey, but I couldn't help but share the idea of 'having attained it, richly' at any rate, I'd love to hear it sung |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sometimes we just have to sing ourselves a lullaby, and if I could sing (haha), I might just try this Sunshine as it truly was lovely. No matter how old anyones gets they still need comforting. If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
What a neat thought, comfort, yes comfort. Thank you for shareing. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Snooganzmeister32 Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67Cali, USA |
hush my baby comforted, be you’re my child all children, we This was a really sweet poem, dear. *hugglez* My mum likes it to! |
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