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rwood
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0 posted 2001-08-19 10:45 AM


She is round in the belly again.
Everyone gathers today in shower.
Why is it that we are supposed to be happy
For inside, I'm sad. Am I cold hearted?

Two already here begging for attention.
Unoticed they grow stunted. Invisible.
I do not understand why! I weep in silent.
For I can do nothing but hug them real.

I felt responsible for the first one. Now, big
As I am tall. She is wistfull, and lonely. I cry.
For her daddy was my buddy. I never thought he'd
Sleep with my Blood. He was just a shadow.

I knew he was Eddie Haskel. But She was Gidget!
He hid away in disabled fatherhood. Imagine that.
Even if I searched out his disgrace, She loved him.
I was only casting light to enhance, the betrayal.

Today I give to her diapers. A bib, a sleeper.
Wishing I could box up strength and love!
I would wrap the box tightly. Using rolls of tape
So that she'd know the ties that bind us. Strong!

As I have sat back and tried to fade in darkness.
I have miserably failed. I have only given her
Longing. To wander aimlessly along, in life.
As she always felt she walked in my shadow.

If she only knew how I would bring her the sun.
If it would brighten her life somehow.
If she only knew how I wish it were the other
Way around. I was so foolish and self-centered.

How hard she tried to hold my hand, escaping
Her always. Today I will step forward. God
help us both. My hiding place will be gone
And her eyes will hurt in the new light.

Together, we can shine in the stronghold of sisterly
love.

© Copyright 2001 Regina Wood - All Rights Reserved
Rex Allen McCoy
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1 posted 2001-08-19 11:01 AM


excellent thoughts ... and a good step to the future

nicely said

catalinamoon
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2 posted 2001-08-19 11:06 AM


Wow, this is how I felt at my daughters third baby shower, when there were already two who could not be adequately cared for. Its a very hard thing. And this sounds even more complex. Very good write, R.
Sandra

VAS
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3 posted 2001-08-19 11:57 AM


such a powerful lot of emotions here, and some that should be let go...and it seems you've tried or are trying, keep seeking...I'm positive it's an important goal for you and your sister

don't quite understand why you feel responsible for the first, but think probably I'm not supposed to, yet, for you're not ready for that, I'm certain the time will come for you, though

prayers

rwood
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4 posted 2001-08-19 08:54 PM


Rex: Thank you dear Sir. I appreciate you reading.

Catalinamoon: Yes, it is hard. Very complex, and heavy for this forum. But I wanted to show that I am willing to go forward even still. I hope all is well with your little ones. Thank you  

Vas: Thank you for your prayers. We both need them. I feel guilty, because I brought him around. It was me that trusted him first. She just followed suit. I felt I allowed her to get hurt. Course, I'm the big Sis. It's the way we feel sometimes.  Yes, I will try harder than ever, to show her I can't change what has happened, but I can be her Sis.

Thank you all so much for reading. This piece was so heavy. A big load for me. The release helped so much.

Sincerely,
Regina

Sunshine
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5 posted 2001-08-20 08:37 AM



Blood is thick in this one.  Well done, Regina...

Cpat Hair
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6 posted 2001-08-20 09:08 AM


now this..I can relate to on several levels..and find it so well told..I felt you were writing about someone in my family... very nicely done... and the message... well one that needs to be told...


Janet Marie
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7 posted 2001-08-20 10:33 AM


As I have sat back and tried to fade in darkness.
I have miserably failed. I have only given her
Longing. To wander aimlessly along, in life.
As she always felt she walked in my shadow.

If she only knew how I would bring her the sun.
If it would brighten her life somehow.
If she only knew how I wish it were the other
Way around. I was so foolish and self-centered.

How hard she tried to hold my hand, escaping
Her always. Today I will step forward. God
help us both. My hiding place will be gone
And her eyes will hurt in the new light.

Together, we can shine in the stronghold of sisterly
love.

=========================

this is excellent...powerful, intense purge of honesty, intention and emotion.
very well written and expressed Regina...
shes lucky to have you...good luck to you both in this time of healing and new beginings.
jm

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

rwood
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8 posted 2001-08-20 06:43 PM


Sunshine: I'm so glad you read it that way. Thanks for stopping in. I greatly appreciate you.

Cpat: I sincerely do find comfort in your words. It is not an issue spoke about daily, but it does exist. Thank you for your constant connection. It keeps me grounded  
I hope your situation finds light and peace.

JanetMarie: You touch my heart with kindness. Your encouragement and sentiments will not be forgotten.

Sincerely,
Regina

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