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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-18 11:37 PM




Wax Dance

candle
in your waxen
white
dance
under flame
tonight
melting
now in
design
rhythm
of versed
line
fire
within you
climbs
vanishing
more with
time



"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare



[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-19-2001).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-18 11:42 PM


OneSlickLady~
Ahhhhhh !
Appears we both are dancing silhouetted tonight~

Wonderful grace from your pen~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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jwesley
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2 posted 2001-08-19 01:07 AM


Neat. Like this'un real good!

jwesley

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2001-08-20 04:38 PM


A vanishing dance ... the dance of seven melts

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