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Ever Blooming Flower
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Ever Blooming Flower |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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This I wrote for a friend of mine whom I have come to care a great deal for and cherish our relationship, Ever Blooming Flower Magnificent flower born in unstable earth, yet continually striving towards a solid foundation. Your petals glisten in suns rays and in moons glow fragrance emanates sweeten delight. All your seasons have produced stormy weather, but your life force prevails with much vim and vigor. “Oh” how your dreams of one day to stand tall among the thistles and have no thorn pierce your beauty! Contemplation runs its course continually taunting, yet always in the forefront your thoughts in which way shall you step. You do not know it, but you are an ever blooming flower, a gem in a world taking you for granted. Your roots will find solid ground your days shall be blessed, never give up your wants and desires there will be grand reward. In this time of struggle know you are loved, your presence is wanted, needed and cherished. Just bloom on in fragrant delight knowing life shall come full circle and you shall radiate in the splendor of your dreams. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 08-18-2001).] |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
Very beautiful and caring poem. The cares of the day and lifetime problems can hold us back, but we must move forward. there is a reward if only in knowing that we tried. And who knows, through the grace of God we may succeed. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Aye, me friend, and I can tell your friend knows just how much you care. If it's this evident in your writing, I know it stands tall in life...lucky, lucky person to have one who cares so. jwesley |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ So sweetly sincere are your thoughts~ Your friend would treasure you, I'm sure~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Just bloom on in fragrant delight knowing life shall come full circle and you shall radiate in the splendor of your dreams." Beautiful Cerenity! Wonderfully inspirational ... your friend is truly fortunate to have you by her side. Much enjoyed!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
What better way to show true emotions than to characterize a loved on in metaphore. Lovely write. |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
I know your friend will be honoured ny this beautiful gesture "the blizzard of the world has crossed the threshold and it has overturned |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
it is a blessed person to have you for a friend, cerenity....this is wonderfully done |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful free verse my friend. . . a lovely flow and such superb words. . . great job. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your friend should appreciate this for a long time. Well done |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so very much for all of your kind replys, yes I have been blessed to have a friend like her and I think she feels the same, once again thank you. Love, Cerenity |
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