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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-08-18 06:12 PM



Envelop Me

envelop me
in a white sheet
tucked and folded
where all ends meet
be a little glue
at triangle edge
seal it with a kiss
let it be your pledge



"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

[This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 08-19-2001).]

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shadow974
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since 2001-06-21
Posts 636
Michigan
1 posted 2001-08-18 07:34 PM


Ah... a cocoon of love! Nicely done.

Throw your heart out in front of you
And run out to catch it.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2001-08-18 07:56 PM



Oooh I really love this!  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2001-08-18 11:37 PM


What a secure feeling this would be.
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2001-08-19 01:09 AM


Me gosh, by golly gee, for you, me friend, I'd give anything a try...another winner in me eyes...

jwesley

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043

5 posted 2001-08-19 01:25 AM


Sweetie, this is a splendid write it had my mind drifting into the feeling of being once again wrapped up all nice and snuggly in the arms of the one I love...

Hugs2uPoetFriend
*~coco~*

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