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Zinsser
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0 posted 2001-08-18 11:26 AM



I hold you as you sleep
Thinking of all to come
And all we've done
Yes,
I would Choose it all
Again


Connie McDonald
Copyright@2001

© Copyright 2001 Connie McDonald - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-08-18 03:58 PM


Zinsser~
It's a good blueprint, when you want to follow it again~
Nice thoughts.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Zinsser
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Calif.
2 posted 2001-08-18 05:46 PM


Thank You...

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-08-19 12:34 PM


It is a question I ask myself often, sometimes my reply is less than positive.  You've written a moment to hold onto.  
jwesley
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4 posted 2001-08-19 12:53 PM


Sweetly short...longing for "again". Very nice.

jwesley

Zinsser
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5 posted 2001-08-19 10:11 AM


Jwesley And Duncan
Thank You Both
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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6 posted 2001-08-20 08:47 AM


yes.... simply stated, and showing a caring and love for what is and was... nicely said!!

I enjoyed!

Zinsser
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Calif.
7 posted 2001-08-20 09:43 AM


Ron,
Thank You Very Much

           Thank You
         ~~~Connie~~~

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