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Sunnyone
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0 posted 2001-08-17 06:16 PM







Sometimes I don’t write the words I know
you’d like to hear…
And sometimes I  don’t know what I should say…
I try to say what’s in my heart,
and make it all seem clear…
But sometimes love and need  get in the way…

Circumstance has placed me in a room
without a door…
I close my eyes, and then I call your name…
A hole appears, the sun shines through,
where there was none before…
And melts away my sadness and my pain…

There is no doubt, in my mind…
Of the love I know I’ll find…
And I’m sorry if it ever seemed that way…
and when all our trials are through…
It will be just me and you…
For we were meant to be in love to stay…

For you, I’d fly o’er mountains tall,
and over oceans wide…
My heart already waits there at your door…
And someday I know I will stand in love,
right by your side…
That’s all I ask of life, and nothing more…

So, please forgive my clumsy words,
and know that they are true…
Words are all I have to use right now…
But someday, I will show my love…
I’ll give it all to you…
And make up for this emptiness somehow…

There is no doubt, in my mind….
Of the life I know we’ll find…
When up ahead the road is straight and clear…
And when the memories are all gone,
and we write a brand new song…
Our angels will be singing,
what we always knew we’d hear…

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...
  
    


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RSWells
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1 posted 2001-08-17 06:33 PM


Keep the faith. Almost songlike.
Snooganzmeister32
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2 posted 2001-08-17 09:04 PM


That is one of the best love poems I've read in a while. *hugglez* I loved it!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2001-08-18 01:27 AM


SunnyOne~
You give us a lovely melody in your verse~

'For you, I’d fly o’er mountains tall,
and over oceans wide…
My heart already waits there at your door…
And someday I know I will stand in love,
right by your side…
That’s all I ask of life, and nothing more…'


Beautiful thoughts~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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catalinamoon
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4 posted 2001-08-18 07:15 AM


Nice writing, Sunny, from the heart, as we can see.
Sandra

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-08-18 09:33 AM


Beautiful heart-filled sentiments Sunny ... your devotion and love shine genuinely through these inspiring lines. Very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Ariana
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since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
6 posted 2001-08-18 08:51 PM


Sunny
You certainly have beautiful words and a beautiful, tender heart.  Keep smiling - your day will come.

shadow of the fall
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Indiana
7 posted 2001-08-19 02:41 AM


This sounds like an historical romance !!!!

Karen

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