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Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

0 posted 2001-08-17 02:12 PM

coming to
termination of
time and place
ways of space
taking toll
grabbing hold
then letting go

I remain more
than feather
light, a weight
of consciousness,
streaming....

small grooves
of happenings
having creased
a runneling
through time,
ever widening,
taking in
more
expanding barriers,
moving ever
faster,

rushing along

dams will never
hold back all
that the consciousness
allows,

and only a
final
termination of
time and place
ways of space
taking toll
grabbing hold
then letting go

will release me

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2001-08-17 02:21 PM

Oh!! this is so superb, it flows soooooooooo beautifully.

YOU are growing and it's wonderful to see dearest sister, absolutely wonderful.

I'll be back I promise, but right now you know that typing really takes it out of me.

Love you always
take care of you
let your flame burn on brighter and higher
Love and warm stuff
Puck

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 08-17-2001).]

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2001-08-17 04:26 PM

very nice!!! flows well and says much...

I enjoyed!!

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

3 posted 2001-08-17 08:59 PM

Gaining speed in untamed need to be freed. Enjoyed (indeed)

poetsguild
Member

since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

4 posted 2001-08-17 10:01 PM

Most elegant, Decaflame

consciousness -
the breakfast of champions

liked the use of the word "runneling"

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

5 posted 2001-08-20 10:24 AM

And so one, and so on... I like the continuity of this, Deca..

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2001-08-23 12:48 PM

Ms Mushy, it's easy to grow when one is given so much room to stretch...thank you...

Captain, your comments are always vastly appreciated...thank you...

RSW, I do enjoy your poetic comments, thank you...

poetsguild, thank you for taking time to read this...

Nan...you are a bottle of inspiration that I sprinkle liberally...thank you!

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