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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2001-08-17 11:05 AM



In Blend (inspired by Melissa Honeybee’s “Soul Kiss”)

don’t know where I start
and don’t think you could ever end
together in blend



"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet)  Shakespeare

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1 posted 2001-08-17 11:10 AM


yes..I see the inspiration and I see how you got from one to the other... nicely done Helen...


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2 posted 2001-08-17 11:26 AM



Helen, I really like this   I love the line "together in blend"

Believe me, your poetry inspires me!  I wish that I could write like you

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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3 posted 2001-08-19 10:51 AM


Beautiful!
Your education shows in all of your poetry,
the way you put your words together.....

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4 posted 2001-08-20 04:49 PM


I, too, like the last line a lot.  Can I steal it

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5 posted 2001-08-20 04:54 PM


yes (giggle)
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