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The Wind and Stars
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The Wind and Stars |
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darabeth Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33 |
As the wind blows through my hair, I look around and no one is there. I watch to see the stars so bright, There are no stars for me this night. As I listen to the sound of rain, hoping it will mask the pain. I find no peace within my heart, my soul is dead it's torn apart. Without a soul, I am empty inside. My pain has stopped,for I have died. There are no stars for me,no friends. My pain has stopped,no hurt,the end. Dara Beth  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ouch.... nicely written...but painful and such an empty feel to the words.. I know it is what you wished to convey..my heart just goes out to those that feel this way..and I hope they find the stars again..as well as themselves. |
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darabeth Junior Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 33 |
Thank you Capt!Sometimes we all feel this way (I think?).At least I know I do sometimes.Thanks again! Dara Beth |
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