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Remembering . . . Thank you Sunshine
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Remembering . . . Thank you Sunshine |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Inspired by Sunshine's "Freefall Through Death." ~*~ still I see my friends less frequently come the dreams yet the names remain faces still play on mind's screen I will visit twice first, the wall when I get nerve then, again, at Heaven's gate. http://members.home.net/excalibur2501/interloper.htm [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nicely done... very nice indeed. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
hmmm, the wall? the wailing wall? the wall in a mausoleum? showing my ignorance? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I know which wall...and youre not alone in these thoughts, tho I do understand how those memories would make one feel that way at times. this is a touching,haunting, write.. well done poet sir...and welcome back... seems like its been a while  jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
InterLoper~ I'm tenderly moved~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I very much enjoyed this tender and thought-filled verse Interloper, lovely indeed. Best wishes, /Kit |
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BrightStar Member
since 2001-04-08
Posts 219 |
My tears will not dry for a while after reading this. |
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