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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2001-08-17 08:21 AM


       Haiku    

Illusions flower
Fragments the passage of time
And forever blooms



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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-17 08:25 AM


very nice Seymour.... quite a lot said here with just the few words... I enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-08-17 08:31 AM


a  morning ~smile for you, Sy

~Wynter

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3 posted 2001-08-17 08:32 AM



Sy....perfection greeting my eyes...

thank you!

Nan
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4 posted 2001-08-17 08:37 AM


Perenniel rose
Fragrant petal shields from thorn
A lifetime treasure

Honeybee
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5 posted 2001-08-17 08:41 AM


Wow - well expressed!  Haiku suits you well.  More, please!  

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2001-08-17 09:52 AM


Love's rose of suppose
velveteen petals unfurl
kissed by mornings's mist

Blossoms of fragrance
Scents waft thru Eden's garden
Perfumed promises

~~~~~~~~~

only you could inspire me to write when I just woke up.  
*winkiewinkie*
me

Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom
Precious rhythm you are my guide
These days are sacred, my heart is humble
Oh warrior show me thy light

VAS
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7 posted 2001-08-17 09:59 AM


ahh, very nice


'forever blooms'  extremely nice

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8 posted 2001-08-17 01:06 PM


forever blooms indeed. . .

well done Sir. . . well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

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9 posted 2001-08-17 01:11 PM


Seymour~

Flower of the morn
Blooms in verse of sweet adorn
Penning fragrantly


*Ya' just knows how ta' do it all, don't ya'~
You sweetheart, you !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2001-08-17 01:16 PM


Cpat Hair, Thank you.

Wynter, Thank you for the morning smile.

Lady, Thank you for perfection. *L*

Nan, And joy rides the wind
     With your perenniel rose
     Truely a treasure.

Melissa, Thank you for the WOW, I'll try.

JM, Beautiful awakening, love ya.

VAS, Thank you for the very.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2001-08-17 01:20 PM


Sven, Thank you my friend.

Marge, I'm mugging you some kisses and hugs.
*L* Sy

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2001-08-17 09:55 PM


Very beautiful Seymour!

Maree  

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13 posted 2001-08-17 09:57 PM


Well said with
subtle metaphors

a lot of message
in a small package

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2001-08-17 10:24 PM


Dark Angel, Thank you

Poetguild, Nice comment, thank you.

KaziaRose
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15 posted 2001-08-18 12:57 PM


Beautiful Haiku, enjoyed
~Kaz~

A mellifluous muse lies within this poet

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