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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In days to come, the echo of your shadow will float me into senses of the once unknown. Dancing my wildest dream, the awareness of you shall overpower and return me to love. The toxicity of you shall peel back to lost layers, freeing mine to accept yours. Looking into those shaded blues, I shall sail beyond the painful past weathering yet, another storm... I wait. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Looking into those shaded blues, I shall sail beyond the painful past weathering yet, another storm... I wait. Wynter~ wonderful write, loved the thoughts ~HUGS~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you tracie..was just reading yours as well *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 08-17-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
just do not wait too long.... life is more than waiting... it is for living.. nicely done..and I enjoyed as usual reading your pennings... chin up! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The toxicity of you shall peel back to lost layers, freeing mine to accept yours. Looking into those shaded blues, I shall sail beyond the painful past weathering yet, another storm... ===================== oh this is lovely... bittersweet beautiful essence to this write some things are worth waiting for well done as always Wynter take care jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
love poems about shadows! loved it! Karen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes I believe it will happen and I hope soon...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
"I shall sail beyond the painful past weathering yet, another storm.." Fantastic last two lines that just grab the heart and sear themselves right there! A must to remember. Wonderful job. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Wynter, Good write enjoyed the read. |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
I feel this way, all sad inside, I've just come out of a divorce and if it weren't for a great friend, I'd be lost. I know this feeling well. Karen |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
The toxicity of you shall peel back to lost layers, freeing mine to accept yours. ================= Love the above. So much said in so few lines ... you are a treasure. |
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