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Duncan
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A captive audience by her own design
asked the story of you tonight

I wove us the fantasy
wed thought to be
a given

She fell asleep tonight
my words a soft lullaby

I remembering
how I loved talking you to sleep

© Copyright 2001 Duncan - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 08-17-2001 02:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Duncan~
Soft ... tender ... longingly portrayed~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Snooganzmeister32
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This really said something to me. When I find out what, I'll let you know.
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this is very nice...helen
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Beautiful and tender words here. Thanks Duncan.
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A very tender write, a lovely read...Duncan, you have a very quiet gift...keep sharing, please...
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very nice... tender, soft, and gentle...

a pleasure to read..and a pleasure to picture in my mind...

I enjoyed a great deal
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Shhh...it's early, and I don't want to wake anyone up...

just want to read
lovely expressions...
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I still love this one, Dunc.
Nice bedtime reading material.
JamesMichael
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Enjoyed...James
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precious
 
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