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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-17 12:03 PM


I have climbed the peaks in search of passion
only to fall into the depths of despair
Before you came along I searched for love
as I survived in the desert of loneliness
until I found the oasis of your love
How I drank from its well
and sampled its succulent fruit
Now my soul was filled with the love
I had craved for so long

Together we thrive within the garden
of our love and bloom in our private paradise
With reckless abandon we dive
into the depths of desire
as we immerse ourselves
in love's tranquil waters

Being with you calms my soul
and warms my heart
Without you - I barely exist

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

1 posted 2001-08-17 12:08 PM


Being with you calms my soul
and warms my heart
Without you - I barely exist

It does feel like that sometimes, doesn't it?

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-08-17 12:42 PM


Nice expression...James
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
3 posted 2001-08-17 12:59 PM


Very nicely written. I do like the sound of these lines.
"With reckless abandon we dive
into the depths of desire
as we immerse ourselves
in love's tranquil waters"

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2001-08-18 02:35 AM


SueTang~

'I survived in the desert of loneliness
until I found the oasis of your love'


Drink hearty from the wellspring of love sweet frind~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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