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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-08-16 08:19 PM

Crossroads

might we journey forth this night
on our field trip of will’s might
beneath scented dusk’s twilight
to bask under pale moonlight

avenues shall beg our feet
winsome stroll long lonely streets
moonflowers still smell so sweet
katydids shall strum their beat

from this chair my will’s not weak
moonlit strolls shall I still seek
in dreams where you come to peek
leaving kiss upon my cheek

in my dreams my legs are strong
trolling lanes to dance along

poetsguild
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since 2001-08-12

Posts 85
Florida

1 posted 2001-08-16 08:23 PM

Nice rhyme and rhythm
subject matter and treatment
very moving.

Very good, Sunshine.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

2 posted 2001-08-16 08:32 PM

Ahh, Sissie, the crossroads of life..what wonderful paths they can take us on..very gentle smile

Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22

Posts 774
IN

3 posted 2001-08-16 08:40 PM

This was splendid Sunshine...it is a positive thing when the handicap can still dream at those crossroads...you did this very well! *S*

MyEnchanted_Melody
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since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-08-16 09:42 PM

in my dreams my legs are strong
trolling lanes to dance along

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Oh....crossroads.....if we could only cross them safely....

You have said it wonderfully......

Thank you
************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2001-08-16 11:50 PM

Karilea~

Take a bow !
I just LOVE this !

*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

6 posted 2001-08-17 06:40 AM

Beautiful Karilea ... superb cadence and rhyme throughout this tender and thought filled piece, just lovely!

Best wishes,
/Kit

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

7 posted 2001-08-17 07:02 AM

Hi sunshiny girl

I love this, love the way it flows...beautiful warm write
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

rwood
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since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

8 posted 2001-08-18 09:04 AM

Thank you for sharing such lovely thoughts. I could embrace the whole poem in nostalgic roaming. You penned the crossroads with little cobblestones of life.
Sincerely,
Regina

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

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New Brunswick Canada

9 posted 2001-08-18 09:06 AM

Sunshine this is very well done! Those crossroads affect all and you have presented this work with such insight!

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25

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Somewhere... out there...

10 posted 2001-08-19 04:21 PM

Karilea-
   Much applause indeed!
   Wunnerful, wunnerful!
   I love it.

   hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

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