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Lady In White
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0 posted 2001-08-16 04:05 PM


Shimmering

iridescent trust
auras surround as halos
silent sounds soothing

glittering of eyes
touching gently in recall
steep me in your hue

lips once met are blessed
shimmers of you remain warm
remnants of a smile

communication
linking holds forevering
circle come circle

shimmering



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1 posted 2001-08-16 04:39 PM


shimmering indeed... nicely done!!!!
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2 posted 2001-08-16 04:41 PM


communication hasn't always came easy for me, I liked this a lot!

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3 posted 2001-08-16 06:03 PM


Nice use of the form, Lady In White

Enjoyed it.

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4 posted 2001-08-16 06:41 PM


LadyInWhite~

'lips once met are blessed
shimmers of you remain warm
remnants of a smile

communication
linking holds forevering
circle come circle'


And ... you know~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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5 posted 2001-08-16 06:51 PM


A remarkable piece. BRAVA!

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6 posted 2001-08-16 11:36 PM


Shimmering to say the least!  Wonderful!

If you have but one true friend when you die you were truly blessed
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7 posted 2001-08-17 05:33 AM


Nicely said... musical to the ear as well as vivid imagery for the mind.
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