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Cymbals in the Night
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Cymbals in the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Play me like a violin in the dark of night listen to woodwinds whispering our song a melody of promises, drifting out to bay pluck me like a harp until the light of dawn round and round upon my music box the chorus within your eyes I am drawn ivory keys in the sky play a galaxy a baton of shooting stars lead the way sighs are like thunder, cymbals in the night our hearts beat softly a flower drum song bathing in a symphony of stolen love black tuxedos upon the stage of romance join me upon the brass of my carousel Join me for our finale, our last dance. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quite a tune you have composed here..and the images quite clear... a symphonic encounter I enjoyed |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
sighs are like thunder, cymbals in the night our hearts beat softly a flower drum song I caught a glimpse of a brush in a drummer's hand slow fanning across his cymbal...soft, sensual, and delightful. Willie |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Victoria this is so lovely... the imagery is done with ethereal grace. beautiful romantic inspire. nice to see your name here again  jm Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ This is FANTASTIC ! ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is lovely, as always. I wish I was in the middle of that poem somewhere.. Sandra I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you all very much..appreciate all of your sweet comments hugs to all ~Victoria~ |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
simply lovely..... |
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poetsguild Member
since 2001-08-12
Posts 85Florida |
Play me like a violin in the dark of night listen to woodwinds whispering our song ahhhhh, the music of l'amour beautifully sung |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I like the thoughts of this...James |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Great use of metaphore and simile to create a lovely, vivid picture in the mind. A virtual symphony of imagery. |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Seems the orchestra's tuned and simply awaits a worthy conducter. Enjoyed. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"pluck me like a harp. . . " that's my favorite line Victoria. . . it just is. . . this is a very wonderful poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is wonderful! You have some great lines and images throughout this gem Into my library this goes~Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oooooh...how beautiful!! Enjoyed it ever so much!! |
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shadow974 Senior Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 636Michigan |
You have written a beautiful poem full imagery and romance. Throw your heart out in front of you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you all very much...i appreciate your lovely comments..glad you enjoyed  ~Victoria~ |
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