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insect
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0 posted 2001-08-16 02:02 PM




Can’t stop thinking about you right now
I’ve tried everything and there’s no way how
Finally I succeed then I dream you even more
I live in this fantasy and it’s you I adore

For in my dreams you always appear
These thoughts of you never disappear
As the day goes on I want you even more
Dreaming of you is just something I adore

Hours will pass and you’re still in my heart
As one dream ends another will start
It’s only your face and love in my dreams
You rule my heart taking fantasy to extremes

Adore you I do, I think I love you
Leave my fantasies make my dreams true
But you’re only my friend and that’s all you know
As we pass in the halls you only say hello



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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2001-08-16 02:04 PM


ah... this is bittersweet... nicely done!!
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2 posted 2001-08-16 02:12 PM


It's a bit of blissful agony isn't? Achingly sweet, my friend! And how well I know--I seem to fall in love with EVERYBODY....sigh
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3 posted 2001-08-16 02:22 PM


Insect~
It's so good to see you~
Lovely thoughts you've shared~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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4 posted 2001-08-16 02:49 PM


Love is grand isnt it..nice to hear from you again insect...

                  ~Victoria~

Kit McCallum
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5 posted 2001-08-18 11:04 AM


You've captured a sweet and tender mood with this piece Insect, very nicely done ... it's wonderful to read you again.  

Best wishes,
/Kit

ShannonM
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6 posted 2001-08-18 11:54 AM


Very sweet.  Wish someone felt this way about me!

ShannonM

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2001-08-18 01:30 PM


Ah yes and friendships can be very valuable if desired by both parties...James
Duncan
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8 posted 2001-08-19 12:23 PM


Sweet fantasy holds it's own rewards.
Snooganzmeister32
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9 posted 2001-08-19 12:31 PM


I think many people along with myself have felt this way. Its horrible yet wonderful in a way.
jwesley
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10 posted 2001-08-19 12:49 PM


Ya know insect, until you've tasted ice cream you don't crave it, but once you do, if you don't get it, it stays in your thoughts, your dreams, your fantasies.  Craving for another that you (can't, or at least not yet) have is much the same...like the beggar and the resturant...on the outside lookin' in.  Feel the pull and the longing and the wanting you put in here...hang in there, either it'll turn right or you'll find another fork in the road that looks a lot better.  Nice seeing you again...

jwesley

dgvarner
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11 posted 2001-08-19 01:32 AM


unrequited love?  or unknown...

either is painful at times!  enjoyed this read  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

in front of total strangers will ya kiss me..
flowers for no reason but you miss me..
oh..i wanna be in love.. -etheridge

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