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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-16 12:21 PM


The dark clouds came our way so quickly
and darkened our sun filled day
We were oblivious to the cries overhead
from the seagulls as they flew away
in search of shelter
from the incoming storm

We were too engrossed in one another
to notice the lightning on the horizon
We were making our own electricity
Heavy droplets of rain began
to pound on our salty skin
Only then did we awaken from love's trance
and leave our beautiful beach

We took refuge under the shelter
of a disused boatshed
From here we watched how angry
Mother Nature had become this day
as the waves lashed the shore
and the beach became deserted

You put your arms around me
and held me close to you
as we watched our day transform
from a perfect sun filled day
into a perfect Summer storm

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Logan
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since 2001-05-28
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Arkansas
1 posted 2001-08-16 02:19 AM


Ahh, memories like that can be so sweet and hold us in other times..very well done, Sue..very gentle smile
Cpat Hair
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2 posted 2001-08-16 08:29 AM


I love to watch the storms... the story you tell is a wonderful one...

I enjoyed

vandana
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3 posted 2001-08-16 12:23 PM


enjoy
Lady In White
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4 posted 2001-08-16 02:45 PM



It's raining everywhere but here...so send it on, please....

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