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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 08-15-2001 01:14 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Sometimes

Sometimes you dive in and the water seems warm,
than comes the reality that chills can magnify
upon the surface prematurely being quite costly.
A ripple of words making wakes amongst the calm
and calculating minds that seethe to view differently.

A vision like a tornadic whisper gone array in magnitude,
floating away any realm of truthful understanding.
In the measure of depth one can only presume,
what words have to offer as they float unconsciously
towards their intended destination without warning.

Sometimes only fragments can penetrate surfaces.
Sometimes lightening is mild in comparison.
Sometimes a giggle finds a detour and is lost.
Sometimes a wish is only a one-sided illusion.
Sometimes words just become shallow and worthless.

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.


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A vision like a tornadic whisper gone array in magnitude,
floating away any realm of truthful understanding.
In the measure of depth one can only presume,
what words have to offer as they float unconsciously
towards their intended destination without warning.
such truths here... a nice write and one I certainly enjoyed
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A vision like a tornadic whisper gone array in magnitude,
floating away any realm of truthful understanding.
In the measure of depth one can only presume,
what words have to offer as they float unconsciously
towards their intended destination without warning.

wonderful musings

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine

Lady In White
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3 posted 08-15-2001 04:48 PM       View Profile for Lady In White   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lady In White


The gentle men have spoken for me....
doreen peri
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4 posted 08-15-2001 07:10 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

fine writing here, dreamer... nice to see you again!! hope all is well

some great lines in here, miss poet
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5 posted 08-15-2001 07:25 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well expressed, Gloria. Yes, sometimes, so true.
Nan
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Gloria - It's great to see you - and I really like this piece - Sometimes indeed - I like the line about the fragment penetrating the whole best of all.
Lost Dreamer
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Cpat Hair: Glad you enjoyed, thanks very much.  

Citizenx: Thank You  

Lady in White:Glad you enjoyed also, thanks for reading.  

Doreen Peri: Thank You, it's nice to be seen on my end also   I am fine and dandy, thanks. Glad you liked the poem.  

Denise: Thank You very much  

Nan: Thank You. I enjoyed writing this poem.  
JamesMichael
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Sometimes you fall in love all by yourself...James
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wow this is good writing! Everyone already quoted my fav lines
hope to see more from you soon
passing shadows
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yes...sometimes
passing shadows
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sigh

so true
so sad
 
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