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Looking Forward
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Looking Forward |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Looking Forward advancing quickly, moribund flashes of demise for the season almost past, settling around my shoulders with a gasp of scarecrow propensity, having done its task, emblazoning bodily tattoo reminders on willing worshippers while I, still shades of pale, will enter winter not having neglected anything nor having cancered my thoughts a flake at a time |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah.... nicely crafted... I personally will enter Winter with regret for the change and loss of warmth from sun and breeze... nice work... and I know much more lies under the words than simple change of season... I enjoyed |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I love the way this is written. Seems I'm paying more attention to the effects of the sun. I don't want to be one big freckle anymore. I'm ready for fall much quicker these days. I enjoyed this! Sincerely, Regina |
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wpwpoet Member
since 2001-07-25
Posts 99 |
winter? I am ready. I love dawn in the winter and listening to snowflakes hit the ground. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
season almost past, settling around my shoulders with a gasp of scarecrow propensity, having done its task, emblazoning bodily tattoo reminders on willing worshippers while I, still shades of pale, will enter winter not having neglected anything =========================== Deca dear we seem to be thinking along the same lines of seasons and reasons... and Im thinking this is a very clever, intelligent write.  Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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