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moongoddess
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since 2001-08-14
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0 posted 2001-08-15 09:55 AM



looking through a no ones eyes
i see no ones reflection
no worries
no fears
yet all i wake to is red numbers,
3:00am, a cold sweat, all worries, all fears.
cat eyes and bite marks on necks and hips,
dirty floors and shut tight doors,
ceiling spots and a loaded 22,
"friends" playing video games,
and a kiss like nothing happened wrong...

she went to the bay
and she's never coming back.

© Copyright 2001 Mellissa - All Rights Reserved
Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
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1 posted 2001-08-15 10:04 AM


quite visual you paint with this.... nicely done!

The feelings of being lost and not quite owning even yourself are strong...

enjoying your writes...look forward to see how and what else you decide to show us of yourself.

catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
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The Shores of Alone
2 posted 2001-08-15 04:11 PM


well, this kind of gave me chills. Nice job, fellow moon-lover
Sandra

I took a walk around the world to ease my troubled mind. I left my body lying somewhere in the sands of time (3 Doors Down)

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