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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2001-08-15 09:33 AM

I wish to be
Inside your softness
And feel for just
A small moment
That you care

Wrap me
Fold me
Smother me
In love

Day to day
Marches are played
And fiddlers are paid
As we in Looneytoon
Lives try to cope
With anvils
Dropped

The pains are
The hopes are
The times are

Year to Year
Characters change
And new ones from
Fertile seeds grow
To chase dusty road runners
Into horizons we know
Have no depth

So in this space
Shared just now
Put me inside your love
Stroking my head
As I rest…

Getting ready to run
Another race in talking cars
with flying fools

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

1 posted 2001-08-15 09:39 AM

Darn! This takes me all over the place, and a wonderful trip it was, too!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-08-15 11:18 AM

Like this very much,. Ron, but especially this section below:

                        Wrap me
                        Fold me
                        Smother me
                        In love

                        Day to day
                        Marches are played
                        And fiddlers are paid
                        As we in Looneytoon
                        Lives try to cope
                        With anvils
                        Dropped

                        The pains are
                        The hopes are
                        The times are

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

3 posted 2001-08-16 01:27 AM

Ah, yes, the softness . . .
but,
"Getting ready to run
Another race in talking cars
with flying fools"
sounds a little too much like tomorrow morning!
Enjoyed he read.

citizenx
Member

since 2001-07-31

Posts 189
motorcade

4 posted 2001-08-16 03:45 PM

MEEP MEEP

yip I watched too many looney tones as a kid
never thought about cartoons and love in the same breath. enjoyed this alot Cpat

shadows flicker sweet end tame
dancing like crazy mourners" magazine

rwood
Member Elite

since 2000-02-29

Posts 3793
Tennessee

5 posted 2001-08-18 07:28 AM

I think we should boycot ACME interprises. That hole I bought to sink into just wouldn't work! I loved this! And in the weirdest way, I completely understand.
Sincerely,
Regina

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