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The Final Flight
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The Final Flight |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The final flight I have searched the infinity of desire With beating wings in the molasses of mire And I have searched the forever of time On the magic carpet of poetic rhyme I have created a world of decision With a paintbrush and palette of vision. I have harnessed the wild of agony And over come the terms of ecstasy. I’ve danced with the moon in the light of high noon With silver shadows on the edge of high soon I have challenged the stars and galaxies far And used them to light the richest of moiré For truth and lies are the wings of the dove And everything begins and ends with love If you touch the touchstone of understand. It vibrates the strings of ocean and sand. It is the way to the door without key The goal and the soul of the sand and the sea |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And I have searched the forever of time On the magic carpet of poetic rhyme I have created a world of decision With a paintbrush and palette of vision. ======================================== I’ve danced with the moon in the light of high noon With silver shadows on the edge of high soon I have challenged the stars and galaxies far And used them to light the richest of moiré For truth and lies are the wings of the dove And everything begins and ends with love If you touch the touchstone of understand. It vibrates the strings of ocean and sand. It is the way to the door without key The goal and the soul of the sand and the sea ================================== OH SY!!!! I am the one flying... this is AWESOME...what a very very cool poem... this is a perfect example of what made me fall for your poetry so long ago... you capture so much and write with so much vision.. and wrap it all up in your always impressive gift for cadence and rhyme... I LOVE THIS POEM!! You rock when you fly Sy-babes...  meFeels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom Precious rhythm you are my guide These days are sacred, my heart is humble Oh warrior show me thy light [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
For truth and lies are the wings of the dove And everything begins and ends with love If I've read more genuine words, I can't remember when. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Exceptional imagery, Sy. Wow!! This was stunning!!  All writing comes |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank you for this one sy. HUGS. I will try to keep this in mind. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is the way to the door without key The goal and the soul of the sand and the sea ================================ wanted to start my day with Sy-sunshine      Feels like Im dancin with truth and wisdom |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
makes me want to fly! This is so lovely. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"It is the way to the door without key The goal and the soul of the sand and the sea" Oh my Seymour ... the sentiments captured throughout the poem are beautiful in cadence and rhyme, but I must say, your closing line is simply exquisite! "The goal and the soul of the sand and the sea" This just rolls through the mind with perfection! MUCH enjoyed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
For truth and lies are the wings of the dove And everything begins and ends with love very lovely write, as always, Sy. most enjoyable to read your words. ~Wynter |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I'll Email you an answer, winkiewinkie Sy Duncan, A wonderful comment. Lone Wolf, A very large thank you. Serenity, Thank you for the read and response JM, You are just beautiful. Shadow, Just click in your mind and off you go. Thank you. Kit, And your answer rolls through my mind. Thank you. Wynter, Your answer was a joy to read. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy A truly beautiful piece in every way In phrases that delight my senses WEll done, master Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I was thinking of you all day yesterday and looking at the lovely pictures of you and your family. It gave me a very warm feeling. As does your wonderful poetry. Love Sy |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Seymour... what can I say that hasn't? I will say I enjoyed and that I too thought this an exceptional piece of writing. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat Hair, I think that's an exceptional response. LOL thank you. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ My, my ! A flight such as this, deserves re-fueling~ Back to the top of the heap my friend. You are the king of a poetic mountain ! What you do with a phrase is sheer magic~ SO ... that makes you the King Of Magic Mountain Poetry~  Long reign the King~ *Hugs* by the bushel~ Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I missed this...a flight of whim upon the brim of raspberry tea pleases me... well done Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, As Gleeson used to say, "you're the greatest." Two bushels of hugs and kisses back at ya. Love ya Sy Sunshine, Glad you caught this flight. *L* |
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