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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Fleeting shadow used to be love door ajar remembrance of touch glimpse of passion reminiscence of happiness shadow fades door slammed passion disintegrated memories tainted love terminated |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
So sad, Sandra. Very well expressed. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, Everything thing that could be said, you have said here. Lovely.... Love, Elise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just HUGS. (sorry I missed your birthday, my friend---didn't forget you, I just get into 'silent times' sometimes and just write) Will write you soon...and keep that heart open lady, and love yourself as we do. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I like the style you've used in writing this. Also, the 'then and now' contrast. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Fleeting shadow used to be love door ajar remembrance of touch glimpse of passion Doors open and close all the time... sometimes slammed and fingers caught we wince with pain and nurse the bruises or breaks, guarding them tender far langer than just simple healing demands...yet once tender and sore, we are relunctant to open those doors again.... enjoyed your poem... |
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