navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » Clinging to the Past ( inspired by Enchanted's Violet, Thank You Enchanted!)
Open Poetry #15
Post A Reply Post New Topic Clinging to the Past ( inspired by Enchanted's Violet, Thank You Enchanted!) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Cpat Hair
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793


0 posted 2001-08-14 05:05 PM


Tensioned tendril wrapped
Each
Clinging solid choked
No breath to fall
Between
Leaves or stem so long
Left unpruned,
Uncared

Spiraled stealth sleeping
Each
Higher climb blocking
Locking here
Knowing
Without seeing creeping
Or tightly tendril wrapped
Past

[This message has been edited by Cpat Hair (edited 08-14-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Cpat Hair - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799
USA
1 posted 2001-08-14 05:13 PM



This reminds me so very much of a morning glory's tenacious wrap....and is as delicate as the same....

Snooganzmeister32
Member
since 2001-07-17
Posts 67
Cali, USA
2 posted 2001-08-14 05:19 PM


wonderful read
Marge Tindal
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2001-08-14 05:45 PM


CPatHair~
A nicely composed inspiration~
I remain - ~*AShrinkingViolet*~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
4 posted 2001-08-14 07:03 PM





A lovely piece Ron.......quite wonderful.

I'm thankful for my old dusty poem that it brought out so much from you......  

Thank you.....
************************


"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

[This message has been edited by MyEnchanted_Melody (edited 08-14-2001).]

catalinamoon
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-08-14 08:16 PM


Good one, I like the way you wove this.
Sandra

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #15 » Clinging to the Past ( inspired by Enchanted's Violet, Thank You Enchanted!)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary