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Cpat Hair
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0 posted 2001-08-14 04:19 PM


In hushed tones
you spoke.
Soft words tickled
inner ear equilibrium
and dizzy...
I heard you say
you cared

Brushed strokes
painted spectrums of
new day hopes
on canvas long stretched

I blended the words
into a little sepia
applying pointillist
memories with
swirling
care

Such are the things
which hang
in the gallery
you left
behind



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1 posted 2001-08-14 04:25 PM


this is wonderful......and so touching  
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2 posted 2001-08-14 04:27 PM


Wow... I really, really like this one.. though to be honest I'm not quite sure why. I just think it's creative and interesting (I have a horrible attention span) and just a really good poem. What else can I say? Talent is talent is talent.  

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3 posted 2001-08-14 04:28 PM



the canvas of this is so taut with anticipation of the brush, and what it may leave behind...

well done, Sir...

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4 posted 2001-08-14 08:33 PM


Cpat, this is the art of the heart. A gallery of leavings is true. Some people make you see, and feel things, no one else could again. Leaving signatures and priceless personal works etched forever. I love this very much.
Sincerely,
Regina

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5 posted 2001-08-14 08:56 PM


lovely piece of art
filled with emotion!
well done, again!!!

did I say I appreciate you...and your poetry?

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6 posted 2001-08-14 10:41 PM


To remember in this way, is itself priceless.
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