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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-08-14 02:46 PM



Ellipses Of The Heart

~*Marge Tindal*~

Leave-taking .... you from me
Heartbreaking .... mine in pieces
Breathtaking .... penned poetry
Understanding .... not to be
Accepting .... I unwillingly
Winding .... memories
Reminding .... me
Forevering
lingers
~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Lady In White
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1 posted 2001-08-14 02:54 PM



You know that I...and a few others...love these little...ellipses....of thought...

just as I adore this gem....

MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
2 posted 2001-08-14 02:57 PM




Quite a lovely and innovating piece.....
I like the form.......

Thank you
***************************

"Oh...me!Oh Life!
Of the questions of these recurring..........
Of myself forever reproaching myself,
for who more foolish than I......"
~Whitman~

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3 posted 2001-08-14 03:02 PM


is this one broken?

very creative..and nicely done... I enjoyed

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4 posted 2001-08-14 04:04 PM


Heartbreaking .... mine in pieces
Breathtaking .... penned poetry
Understanding .... not to be
Accepting .... I unwillingly
Winding .... memories
Reminding .... me
==================================

You just covered me in butterfly sprinkles
and you know that I know...  
this ones a keeper  

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5 posted 2001-08-14 04:15 PM


Now that is a shattered heart if I ever saw one, into the library she goes!

To see real beauty ~ look with your heart
   ~* Mysteria *~

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6 posted 2001-08-14 08:14 PM



Marge-
Oh...this just reached in and tugged at my heart.
  
"Leave-taking .... you from me
Heartbreaking .... mine in pieces
Breathtaking .... penned poetry
Understanding .... not to be
Accepting .... I unwillingly
Winding .... memories
Reminding .... me
Forevering
lingers
~"


Touched me deeply, my friend.
Love and big hugs,
~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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7 posted 2001-08-14 08:15 PM


Once again, Marge!!
You are the best!! Very touching poem!!
Keep it up!! I love your poems so much.

~Jeff~

Hi Javi, Acire, Carly, Susan, Jen, Marge, Nan, Ron, Kit, Allan, Marie, Alby, and everyone else in PIP!!

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8 posted 2001-08-14 08:21 PM


Nice, much enjoyed.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-08-14 08:33 PM


Hugs to you, lovely from your heart...  


Lauren~


Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 08-14-2001).]

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10 posted 2001-08-14 09:17 PM


Very creative, Marge! Well done, as always!
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-08-14 10:34 PM


LadyInWhite~
Thanks so much.

MyEnchantedMelody~
I appreciate your sweet reply~

CPatHair~
You had a clue (?)

JanetMarie~
Abundant with those sprinkle ...
from this heart to yours~

Mysteria~
Just one that needs a little mending~
Thank you sweet lady~

Vicky~
I knew you would, sweetie~  

JBaker~
I appreciate your thoughtful reply, friend~

CatalinaMoon~
Thanks, gal~

GreenEyes~
Now ... my turn to smile~
Thank you for peeking in, sweet lady~

Denise~
Thanks so much, friend of my heart~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2001-08-15 07:28 PM


I am so glad that I just happened upon this and you know that if anything is going to get my attention quicker than an image filled poem then it is going to be a "shape" creation and who better to toss one to these hungry eyes but the one who introduced me to them.  Beautifully written and wonderfully crafted as always.

big one for this my friend.

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13 posted 2001-08-15 09:09 PM


Oh creative lady, you have touched my heart with this    I just *love* your shape poems!  I really must try my hand at one sometime    
~Krista  

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you.
And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
~Winnie the Pooh

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14 posted 2001-08-15 10:14 PM


Marge--As well as the Pacific ocean...I have the super glue!    This was so original..and could be read in so many different directions, I'm dizzy!  Hugs!
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-08-16 03:18 AM


MarkB~
You're such a sweetie~
It is no wonder gv ge yuhi~
'Bout time for a 'shaped one' from you~
You do them so well .....
Of course you had a good teacher !
Tee-Hee-Hee !

SmittenKitten~
Do try ... they are so fun !
Thank you, dear.

Martie~
Me blonde ! Me ALWAYS dizzy !
Of course now you know you've got me playing with this one ! ! !

Me from you .... taking leave
Breaking mine heart .... in pieces
Poetry penned ....Taking breath
Not to be .... Understanding
Accepting .... I unwillingly
Reminding....memories
Unwinding .... me
Malingering
forever
~

Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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