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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-08-14 02:46 PM



Last Hours
Virginia Salter

How long will your last hours haunt me
and yet somehow I shant want forget
for all the moments I had to share with you are precious
for no more this side of heaven will I have met

Your scream,  in pain, “What are you trying to do to me!”
when attempt was made to roll you on your side,
to feed or give drink from beside you
was so terribly unsuccessful, though I tried

The rale of death, how it does echo
in the very sinew of my being
your arms flailing as if your air was being swallowed
by some monstrous creature we weren’t seeing

Trying to speak to you, came no answer,
only cries of pain that we should be so cruel
lifting  you to strive for your comfort
when there really seemed quite nothing we could do

Realization your last moments were coming
their imminence so vivid and foreseen
I began “In the Garden” as a prayer
for your soul, through your mind, did I sing

As I sang the last words in my memory
you gave up the ghost before my very eyes
a vapor arose from your forehead
as release of your life filled my sighs

So final those minutes of your going
no recanting all words said as rain
how often had words gone out in loving
were they enough to ease an ounce of our pain

© August 30.  2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-14 03:01 PM


final hours... can stay with us forever..


Victoria
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2 posted 2001-08-14 04:00 PM


Very sad and heartfelt Virginia..nicely written.

              ~Victoria~

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