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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas 
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Observations Stepped on the dog's tail leg hurts cause foot didn't look - mistakes are painful! ~~~ Men are slow-witted when they're touched by a woman - beware the spider. w. james beard, jr. © August 2001 [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I like the second one  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, that second one is great. The first is good too. Kind of funny, in a way. Sandra |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Thanks Sea, and moon, I FIGURED WOMEN would favor the second one...just playing with these and got nailed - hee, hee - for taking "syllables" for granted! Was one short in each piece. GAZOOKS! Need a BIGGER dictionary - a self-checking one. (Is there one just for syllablization???) But I'm fixing to get serious here (Me??? - Serious??) and try to really write some - even with all the syllables. Still feeling my way though. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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