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Ebb Tides
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Ebb Tides |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Drifting like seaweeds are ebb tides of emotions within porcelain sands marooned in the ocean grains of sand and salt blend with devotion haunted pirate ships sunken from greed rubies upon skeletons, within ocean's creed treasure chests entombed with pearl necklaces gold and silver haunting Bluebeards premise skeleton shrimp clinging to emerald moss luring divers to a cemetery below promising jade as buccaneer winds blow masted vessels buried within the shrouds of history maritime waves and monsoon memories excavate tarnished love, restore eternally Within ebb tides and pieces of eight in the sea. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
quite the image painted here.... one I enjoyed... very nicely done |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
The colors leap from the page...this is a beautiful write, Victoria...and a lovely new photo, as well... |
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WRBreezin Member
since 2001-08-04
Posts 212 |
A collage of thought, mystery, and color...your Ebb Tides fascination. Willie |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very much reminiscent of Long John Silver times of Treasure Island. Well done, vivid. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Nice, very strong imagery, as always. Sandra |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
So good to see you, this is wonderful! " I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be" George William Curtis" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I sure missed seeing you on the pages, and this was absolutely fascinating, the picture you painted with your wonderful pen. Great! To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you pat...nice to hear from you..  lady in white..thank you for your sweet comments Willie..thank you for taking time to read.. thank you virginia..glad you enjoyed.. sandra..thanks for peeking in kathleen..thank you very much.. thank you mysteria..after losing in vegas..i havent had much inspiration ha...but i think im back now ha.. ~Victoria~ |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
lovely from you ~V~always.... Lauren |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your poem Victoria...James |
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shadow of the fall Member
since 2001-08-13
Posts 83Indiana |
very nice to read this, enjoyed the phrases and imagery |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you lauren, james and shadow of the fall...so nice to hear from you..thank you for reading.. ~Victoria~ |
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