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Rick
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0 posted 2001-08-14 08:59 AM



So tender is this hand I hold, as sweet as all things sweet
With life and dance from music’s heart, it holds me with its beat
It guides me through the maze ahead and through life’s next display
The hand of love is mine to hold; and it I hold today

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1 posted 2001-08-14 09:45 AM



The warm feel of a partner's hand...well done!

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2 posted 2001-08-14 09:58 AM


nice hand to grasp... nicely done!
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3 posted 2001-08-14 01:33 PM


Rick~

'The hand of love is mine to hold; and it I hold today'

A treat and a treasure~
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-08-14 02:29 PM


Well done, crisp yet tender, bright and memorable.

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5 posted 2001-08-14 06:18 PM


The strongest one there is! Lovely Rick. I hope you hold on for a very long time.
Sincerely,
Regina

Rick
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6 posted 2001-08-15 07:18 AM


Thank you all for you kind words, I will hold the hand as I hold you all as my friends, my family of inspiration and caring.
Nice to know you are all there reading and sharing with me.

Rick

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7 posted 2001-08-15 07:41 AM


Ah Rick, hold it tightly, as it is a great gift.
This is a wonderful morning read. Thanks.
Sandra

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Rick
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8 posted 2001-08-15 08:20 AM


Dear Sandra, I will hold the hand tight, for it is all you my friends who fill my heart and days with love, and it I hold with true affection indeed.

Thank you for your reply.

Rick

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