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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2001-08-14 02:22 AM




Down here in the deep South
we want you folks to know
it's a cotton picking pleasure
to have none of that snow

Our snowballs grow on bushes
in the heat of the noonday sun
The fabric of our lives
is getting that picking done

In 1793 Eli Whitney invented a tool
'cause he saw a need
to quickly separate
the cotton ball from the seed

Come on down to the friendly South
where we boast and claim
Our 'snow balls' ain't freezing
cause we keep 'em in
The Cotton Ball Hall of Fame


*Dedicated to my little 'cotton-pickin' friend, Vicky~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2001 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-14 03:39 AM


My dad was a cotton-picker---and he learned by rote...   He'd love this marge!
(Forgot to add tho...he always hated picking cotton..)

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 08-14-2001).]

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-08-14 04:37 AM


Serenity~
See ... there's a reason for everything~
Vicky found this picture last week
and decided my muses should have it to play with~
Well ... I 'lost' it ... and had her re-send it to me tonight~
AND ... this is the result~

Sooooooooo, it was meant for you !
Convince me otherwise~ (?) ... ain't gonna happen !

Vicky will be sooooooooo tickled to know she was right~
*You see that, Vicky ! ! !
LOL !  

Anyhow, Serenity ... so glad to have shared it with you
for the memories it touched~
*HUGS*
~*Me*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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MoonShadow
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3 posted 2001-08-14 05:08 AM


Of all the 'cotton pickin' pleasures in the south (and there are sooooo many), I never met a person who got pleasure from pickin' cotton, including my Aunts, Uncles, and Mom. But Ya'll can keep that 'cotton pickin' snow up above the Mason Dixon Line. Lovely poem, thanks for sharing.
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4 posted 2001-08-14 10:50 AM


this made me smile..loved it marge..cute as ever..

               ~Victoria~

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5 posted 2001-08-14 11:00 AM



Smiles a'plenty, that's for sho!

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6 posted 2001-08-14 12:27 PM


When I was old enough to follow my mom in the cotten fields she made me a bag out of a flour sack.I would load up my bag and put it in my mom's bag.I never got tired of picking cotten but I could see how mom's big bag cut into her shoulder.Hand picking cotten is one of lifes back breaking chores.The only thing worse is chopping down cotten plants with a hoe.You did not mention wasps,broiling sun and getting your fingers bloody on the sharp boll husks.

paladin

jwesley
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7 posted 2001-08-14 12:34 PM


Well dab my sore nubs with fluff - never picked it myself, but tomatoes and melons aren't easy either.  Although, it was made harder by eating them as you go - tummy swelled and sloshed pretty bad and all you wanted was a Tree...for multiple reasons.

Nice write Marge - didn't pick it but remember the fields and the labourers well.

jwesley

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8 posted 2001-08-14 01:28 PM



  THIS REALLY A CUTIE PIE
   AS ONLY YOU CAN BAKE
     BLESSINGS MARGE

and if the cotton balls get rotten
you cant pick very much cotton.
ok maiden if you dont tease
about snowballs..i wont kid about
        ELI'S GIN

vlraynes
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9 posted 2001-08-14 06:54 PM



Marge-
   Now, you know I LOVE what you've
   done with this cotton pickin' piece.
   Love the history you threw in there too.
   I knew there was a reason why I just had
   to send this picture to you and your muses,
   and now I know why...yep...it was
   definitely meant for serenity.
  
   serenity...big hugs to you, sweet friend.

   Love it, sweet lady!
   Love and hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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10 posted 2001-08-14 07:16 PM


Even though I am knee deep in snow in the winter in Alaska, I actually have had the pleasure(?) of pickin and jumpin on those ol cotton bolls, and remember the nasty scratches on my fingers. I loved this poem!
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11 posted 2001-08-14 07:17 PM


MoonShadow~ Thank you.

Victoria~
Glad you enjoyed, hon.

LadyInWhite~
Sho' 'nuff ???  

Paladin~
Thanks for stopping in~

JWesley~
LOL !  Thanks, fella~

SoaringEagle~
Love ya, sweet friend of my heart~

Vicky~
Fluffy **Hugs** to you my sweet friend~

Yeppers, we knew just where it was supposed to go, huh ?
*Hugs* n' FluffyStuff~
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge Tindal
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12 posted 2001-08-14 07:23 PM


MidniteSun~
You sneak-ked in on me~
Thanks for letting us know you've experienced both~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

sea_of_okc
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13 posted 2001-08-14 07:34 PM


I guess better late than never
To reply to your mighty fine post
Can't relate I was raised up in VA
Where tobaccy was surely picked most

Thanks Marge, a cotton-pickin pleasure to read!

JBaker515
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14 posted 2001-08-14 08:01 PM


Marge,
This was truly awesome, and so orginal.

Great JOB..

Jeeez..when are u going to write something that i dont like??  LOL

I think that it will never happen.

Keep it up Marge.

~Jeff~

Hi Javi, Acire, Carly, Susan, Jen, Marge, Nan, Ron, Kit, Allan, Marie, Alby, and everyone else in PIP!!

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