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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-08-13 10:16 PM


Having found you, my heart’s one wish come true
I am brought to believe in destiny
I now know the need in my soul, was you
ever waiting for love’s discovery

To  blossom  into a sweet forever
promising  a future of passion bliss
found  in the bounty of friendship’s splendor
no emotion felt ,was greater than this

Nurtured by trust and dulcet honesty
we come together in this, the garden
of our hearts, making dreams ~ reality
enchanting, granting quiet prayers spoken

and  it is here, where our hearts shall remain
drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne


~SEA~



© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-13 10:18 PM


Lovely, SEA...hopefully 'tis you 'drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne'...

jwesley

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2 posted 2001-08-14 12:32 PM


May you always have those "bubbles", very romantic Mrs. Sea.

To see real beauty ~ look with your heart
   ~* Mysteria *~

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3 posted 2001-08-14 01:18 AM


A beautiful, romantic poem and I enjoyed it so much!

Betty Lou Hebert

Rick
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4 posted 2001-08-14 09:18 AM


Sea, may the garden in your heart blossom all year round, and the lovers among it sip their champagne of fate toasting love.

A lovely romantic peom Sea, much enjoyed.

Rick

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5 posted 2001-08-14 09:25 AM


lovely and very romantic...you do these very well...
as usual.. I enjoyed a great deal


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6 posted 2001-08-14 09:26 AM



You're kicking these sonnets out like a rabbit having babies....and you're doing a mighty fine job of them, too!

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7 posted 2001-08-14 11:37 AM


Nurtured by trust and dulcet honesty
we come together in this, the garden
of our hearts, making dreams ~ reality
enchanting, granting quiet prayers spoken

and  it is here, where our hearts shall remain
drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne
=============================

Any one ever tell ya love becomes you  
this is beautiful, in both poetic inspire and hearts intend.
well done poetess Sea-girlie

We're all feeding our lonely...like it might go away...
Like the doors to Heaven would swing open...
If we could just find the right words to say

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8 posted 2001-08-14 12:00 PM


wow wish i could write that good, very nice poem, really heart felt and it came across with a lot of heart put into it

Only darkness falls on those without souls

cpalmer
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9 posted 2001-08-14 12:24 PM


Sea
such a beautiful write! May you always be blessed with the overflowing feeling of love!
Hugs
Cindi

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10 posted 2001-08-14 08:02 PM



SEA-
   Yet another beautiful treasure from your pen.
   Your happiness makes me smile.
   Wonderfully done.

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



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11 posted 2001-08-14 08:34 PM


Beautifully done SEA~


Lauren~


***


Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 08-14-2001).]

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12 posted 2001-08-14 09:33 PM


Susan,

    Your writing is sooo amazing. You constantly top yourself.. over and over. How do you it? lol.  I love this.. so soft and beautiful.  

TaraB

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13 posted 2001-08-16 07:52 PM


Never could we say that you don't shine in the inspire of love.  Beautiful sharing of a heart that knows the power and security of a true love in it's arms.
rwood
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14 posted 2001-08-18 09:08 AM


A lovely toast to that commitment. May you always drink in that which began the flow of your lives together.
Sincerely,
Regina

Kit McCallum
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15 posted 2001-08-18 09:27 AM


"and  it is here, where our hearts shall remain
drinking in the richness of fate’s champagne"

Wonderfully romantic Susan ... beautifully descriptive sentiments, and the closing couplet is so sweetly phrased, much enjoyed!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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