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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-13 10:16 PM

Without a single word being said
you have the ability to speak
right to my heart
My heartlight burns so brightly
whenever you are near
and memories of our times together
are never far from my thoughts
How I thrive in the garden of your love
and bloom within the rays of your smile

I sail on the crest of a wave of desire
and dive deep into the depths
of love's sensual sea only to emerge
to the surface as we sail on love's vessel
towards the setting sun

I feel invincible in your presence
as if I am on top of the world
My smile remains a permanent fixture
on my face whenever you're by my side
only to disappear like the sun
behind the clouds when you're gone

Within my dreams I can always find you
as we walk along the warm golden sand
watching the sun as it melts
over the tranquil sea
We lie together on the sand
and admire the constellations
way above the moon's milky glow

You kiss me and transport me
towards the star studded sky
The galaxy glows more brightly
as we make our own fireworks
as our passions are ignited
and love takes charge

Suetang

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2001-08-13 10:24 PM

Hopefully love always charges your hard Suetang...as your words herein do.

jwesley

cruz
Member

since 2000-07-18

Posts 282
Dallas,Texas USA

2 posted 2001-08-14 12:21 PM

eventhough i dont know you your poetry takes me to a different dimension. keep 'em coming. very well written!

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2001-08-15 04:10 AM

Sue, you got me with the title and I was impressed with the rest

As usual you speak your heart so lovingly.

Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

4 posted 2001-08-15 04:29 AM

Very emotional, vivid imagery that communicates well.

shadow of the fall
Member

since 2001-08-13

Posts 83
Indiana

5 posted 2001-08-15 06:30 AM

This is the best form of communication isn't it? Made me think of feeling like a teenager in love.

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