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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-08-13 10:04 PM


Do you miss me as much as I miss you
Does your heart expand with love
whenever we are together
and do your feet sometimes
leave the ground whenever
I speak your name?

Will our love for each other
always remain in our hearts
or will I simply fade from view
an image of yesterday
a passing memory
a small window in the
frame of your mind

Memories of you are firmly entrenched
within my heart - cast in stone
Your image is so very vivid
and you are never far from my thoughts
My heart won't let you leave
but if such a day were to come
I hope I love you enough
to let you go

I would never want you to feel
like a caged bird
trapped with no chance of escape
but one who freely takes wing
and soars through the skies
in search of a better place

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
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1 posted 2001-08-14 12:35 PM


It does hurt sometimes, okay, all the time...but, nice expression of these feelings, Sue...

sp  

can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

Mysteria
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2 posted 2001-08-14 12:43 PM


The secret to love is giving that space and it is sometimes the hardest thing to do.  This is a great poem as a reminder of that.  Well done.

To see real beauty ~ look with your heart
   ~* Mysteria *~

Saunni
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3 posted 2001-08-14 01:59 AM


Suetang, It's like you read my mind when you wrote these words. Very cool write!  

Sauni @~~~>~~

The Sun Shines
Not On Us, But In Us
The River Flows Not Past,
But Through Us

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4 posted 2001-08-14 06:16 AM


SueTang~
I always enjoy your thoughts~

'an image of yesterday
a passing memory
a small window in the
frame of your mind'


See ... this is refreshingly unique~
Thank you for sharing that thought~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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5 posted 2001-08-14 07:39 PM



Suetang-
   Wonderfully expressed emotion here.
   Enjoyed much.

   hugs,
   ~vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2001-08-14 10:42 PM


Thank you all so very much for your lovely comments on this piece, I'm forever grateful.
Take care......Sue

Suetang

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
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Queensland, Australia
7 posted 2001-08-15 04:33 AM


Sue, a question we all ask sometimes I guess. But you put it into words much better than I would  

Dee

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rwood
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since 2000-02-29
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Tennessee
8 posted 2001-08-16 06:03 AM


He would come back, for how could he forget you Sue.   Great love is one that breaths and is never smothered out. Lovely read.
Sincerely,
Regina

vandana
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9 posted 2001-08-16 04:56 PM


enjoyed
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10 posted 2001-08-16 05:05 PM


lovely read.... and love can only truly exist in freedom... courage and faith in the knowledge it is shared..not forced "because" of something....

I enjoyed!!

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