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Do I Dare
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Do I Dare |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Do I Dare Do I dare to wallow in this romantic bliss... Can I dream the surreal visions of all the love I have missed. I am older now, and hopefully more sage. Will this fantasy finally reach the precipe of longing, and unlock this lonely cage? It is a tender journey, to seek a new love. But the trepidation reflects a history of mistakes... Is this another that fate will draw me to make? I barely know you, but my heart is full of butterflies. Is this the Shan-gri-la of fulfillment, ...or just one of my many fairytale lies... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
If we only knew before we got involed then maybe we could save ourselves from being hurt. But I guess we still ave to try. Nice poem tho. You don't have a choice to die but you do have a choice how you meet it. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Moon Dust, Thank you for reading. We never know, do we? We just have to give fate a chance sometimes. But it hurts so much if we get burned. Ouch! Thanks for your sweet reply  Elise |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Did you know that Grits & Eggs are wonderful? And we never quite know how a chocolate covered morsel in a fancy box is gonna turn out either...but we go for it don't we - I think loves just the same...go for it, enjoy it, however long it last. Good write my friend jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Jwlsley, Thanks you for the kind response. We never know, do we?? Elise |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yeah go for it girl..Nicely done poem, too. Sandra |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, I'm going to "go for it". I just hope it's not another heartbreak  Love, Elise |
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