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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
.....what comes..... in no way am I your lone amaze or even your awe to inspire I know naught what could elevate a skein of thought somewhat higher though residing is this lingering, quickening prosaic conspire its arcing, sparking, non-contained danger’s caress by a live wire you may not envision this force as its mêlée shows in my face distance parts me from any one who might feel it in my embrace it rumbles, grows, some quivering shows waiting in diffuse disquiet, it glows so plant a seed, then tick forward time as moment’s desire springs forth in chime what then shall come from this overt portent by silent kiss [This message has been edited by Decaflame (edited 08-13-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ohhhhhhh I think this is wonderful! Very nice feel to this one  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
It's the vacuum which invites lightning and the unseen tremble whose energy is anything but inert. Enjoyed "Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in no way am I your lone amaze or even your awe to inspire for I know naught what could elevate a skein of thought somewhat higher though residing is this lingering, quickening of prosaic conspire ================================ distance parts me from any one who might feel it in my embrace it rumbles, grows, some quivering shows waiting in diffuse disquiet, it glows so plant a seed, then tick forward time as moment’s desire springs forth in chime what then shall come from this overt portent by silent kiss ================================== Oh my....my oh my.... (IWIHWT) damn do i wish  I know no one is to blame |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
in no way am I your lone amaze or even your awe to inspire for I know naught what could elevate a skein of thought somewhat higher though residing is this lingering, quickening of prosaic conspire its arcing, sparking, non-contained danger’s caress by a live wire very well said.... as always a pleasure to read.. |
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illusion Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 296 |
I'm thunderstruck. This is perfect! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DecaFlame~ I like this bunches~ Very nicely done, my friend~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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lunatic Member
since 2001-04-20
Posts 172 |
A "thank you" whispered in silence to your distant ear in quivering voice unheard. Let thy moon arise. William Blake |
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citizenx Member
since 2001-07-31
Posts 189motorcade |
Decaflame, you know just when I think I have found my favourite part of the poem, I read the next part, and chance my mind. I guess if I had to choose it would be the entire poem. shadows flicker sweet end tame |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
The thoughts inspire..how in the world could you top this with an inspire? very very well done..very gentle smile |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well Logan said it well, can this be topped? Knowing you - probably To see real beauty ~ look with your heart |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
The Netherworld of excitement, waiting to erupt forth into discovery's molten passion. Fantastic! Sincerely, Regina |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Just WOW, that all I can think of.. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Decaflame- Wonderful thoughts. I like this lots! hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 08-14-2001).] |
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JBaker515
since 2001-02-28
Posts 458Dartmouth College |
This was very well done. Keep it UP!! ~Jeff~ |
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